Pitch Feedback

I gained feedback from my class on the pitch I gave on my ideas and song choice, this is what I received -

ISOBEL - 
 - Good song and beat can help create different art aspects
- Idea is original 
- Consider actors because of the distance you are going to 
- It is good that you are adding lip syncing sections, makes the whole video more rounded 
- clothing ideas - grunge? - make costume stand out 

EMMA 
- Overall a really good idea 
- Be careful with song, make sure the footage you get keeps the audience watching as the song is slow, may disinterest people.
- Good editing ideas 

NATHAN 
- Make sure you chose the actors wisely if you are going all the way to Skegness to film

MISS 
- Consider couple - do not have real couple as possibility of them splitting up and not working together properly 
- Instead of going to Skegness, could recreate the same thing at fairs nearby like goose fair and arcades in town.